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  • #16
    Originally posted by Olefin View Post
    thats good to hear - thats one thing that is missing from a lot of the V4 products out there - not having a table of contents really makes it a pain in the butt when you are looking for certain items - yes you can use control F but to me a table of contents is the difference between an amateur production and a professional one

    Looks at his own product and notices the lack of a table of contents.

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    • #17
      Originally posted by Heffe View Post

      Looks at his own product and notices the lack of a table of contents.
      Ok you got me there - but when you are talking 168 pages you have to have a table of contents or its A LOT of back and forth paging

      And thats why pdf releases are good - you can always update it with a table of contents and no harm no foul

      Question - at 168 pages is this the biggest release since the V1 and V2 guide books

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      • #18
        Originally posted by Olefin View Post
        Ok you got me there - but when you are talking 168 pages you have to have a table of contents or its A LOT of back and forth paging

        And thats why pdf releases are good - you can always update it with a table of contents and no harm no foul -

        .
        Lol! In all seriousness, I completely agree. A Table of Contents makes all the difference.

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        • #19
          Ok Raellus - have a question since I havent read it yet - still at work - but I did see this in the blurb posted on DriveThru

          "NATO's American, British, and Italian units that fought alongside them"

          Are we talking other Italian units that went over to NATO that used to be on occupation duty in Yugoslavia perhaps Or is it an Italian unit that was assigned to help Romania prior to the split between Italy and NATO in V1

          The only Italian unit that in canon went over to NATO was the Folgore Mech Division in Going Home and they are acting as anti-Soviet partisans in Austria and only went over due to their commander opposing the socialist coalition for quite a while and despised Italy joining in the war on the side of the Warsaw Pact and the Soviets

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          • #20
            Gentlemen, thank you for the interest. Rather than mass-quote several of you, I'll address today's questions in general.

            The total word count on this book is around 85,000. Those of you who've previously bought The Pacific Northwest will have a basis for comparison: that one was about 65,000 words. As a professional writer, I find word count to be a more accurate measure of content than page count, as it's easy to inflate page count with large fonts (looking at you, first edition 7th Sea) or lots of art. Those who were happy with PNW's look and feel should be comfortable with Tara Romaneasca, as we reused my layout settings from PNW. I have a fondness for the classic 1e trade dress and I like to think I got pretty close.

            There is no preview because Marc didn't ask me for one. He didn't ask me for one for PNW, either. In the interest of transparency, though, here are the major chapters and their respective word counts, rounded to the nearest thousand:
            • Romanian History, Geography, and Culture - 9,000 words
            • Romania's Twilight War History - 7,000 words
            • Major Faction - Romania (military and government) - 9,000 words
            • Major Faction - NATO - 7,000 words
            • Major Faction - Warsaw Pact - 11,000
            • Minor Factions - 8,000
            • US State Department - 7,000
            • Running Campaigns in Romania - 7,000
            • Supernatural Options - 6,000


            (I'm not listing word counts for the rules material because careers, weapons, and vehicles get screwy when assessed by word count.)

            Again, those of you familiar with PNW will find the organization of many of these sections to be broadly familiar. It seemed to be a successful template, so we scraped a lot from it when we assembled the project outline for Tara Romaneasca.

            - C.
            Last edited by Tegyrius; 11-30-2022, 05:57 AM. Reason: corrected the approximate word counts; original numbers were based on an outdated worksheet
            Clayton A. Oliver • Occasional RPG Freelancer Since 1996

            Author of The Pacific Northwest, coauthor of Tara Romaneasca, creator of several other free Twilight: 2000 and Twilight: 2013 resources, and curator of an intermittent gaming blog.

            It rarely takes more than a page to recognize that you're in the presence of someone who can write, but it only takes a sentence to know you're dealing with someone who can't.
            - Josh Olson

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            • #21
              Originally posted by Olefin View Post
              thats good to hear - thats one thing that is missing from a lot of the V4 products out there - not having a table of contents really makes it a pain in the butt when you are looking for certain items - yes you can use control F but to me a table of contents is the difference between an amateur production and a professional one
              Is the PDF bookmarked I'd sooner that than just a table of contents in the front of the book.

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              • #22
                The ToC is hyperlinked, as are all of the internal cross-references.

                - C.
                Clayton A. Oliver • Occasional RPG Freelancer Since 1996

                Author of The Pacific Northwest, coauthor of Tara Romaneasca, creator of several other free Twilight: 2000 and Twilight: 2013 resources, and curator of an intermittent gaming blog.

                It rarely takes more than a page to recognize that you're in the presence of someone who can write, but it only takes a sentence to know you're dealing with someone who can't.
                - Josh Olson

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                • #23
                  We might be able to add that feature to a product update- one of the benefits of the PDF format (DriveThru automatically provides customers free updates if the product is modified).

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                  Author of Twilight 2000 adventure modules, Rook's Gambit and The Poisoned Chalice, the campaign sourcebook, Korean Peninsula, the gear-book, Baltic Boats, and the co-author of Tara Romaneasca, a campaign sourcebook for Romania, all available for purchase on DriveThruRPG:

                  https://www.drivethrurpg.com/product...--Rooks-Gambit
                  https://www.drivethrurpg.com/product...ula-Sourcebook
                  https://www.drivethrurpg.com/product...nia-Sourcebook
                  https://www.drivethrurpg.com/product...liate_id=61048
                  https://preview.drivethrurpg.com/en/...-waters-module

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                  • #24
                    Ill take a look at that. This project admittedly stretched my InDesign skills already, but it wont hurt me to learn something new there.

                    - C.
                    Clayton A. Oliver • Occasional RPG Freelancer Since 1996

                    Author of The Pacific Northwest, coauthor of Tara Romaneasca, creator of several other free Twilight: 2000 and Twilight: 2013 resources, and curator of an intermittent gaming blog.

                    It rarely takes more than a page to recognize that you're in the presence of someone who can write, but it only takes a sentence to know you're dealing with someone who can't.
                    - Josh Olson

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                    • #25
                      173rd Airborne in Romania - nope. Lets point out why

                      Frank Frey's unreleased Kenya module which has been discussed here ad infinitum had the 173rd in Kenya - for V1. The RDF and Kings Ransom referred specifically to US troops in Kenya as a prelude to that module. They were there specifically to guard the port and refinery at Mombasa which CENTCOM needed.

                      Second - Raellus own entry in the first fanzine - based on the discussion of Frank's notes - shows the 173rd in Kenya - not Romania

                      Third - the East Africa Sourcebook which is V2.2 canon - not a fan release but official canon per Marc - shows the 173rd in Kenya since 1997 to guard that refinery and port initially - the only reason its not V1 is that, per Marc, he was not interested in canon releases for V1. Thus the 2019 re-release of the EAS specifically scrubbed all references to V1 and added a lot of V2.2 elements to it.

                      So you have multiple pre-existing references to the 173rd being in Kenya not Romania

                      Now I can see Tegyrius not knowing that the East Africa Source Book is canon and that the 173rd is in it because he has studiously ignored everything I have ever released, let alone my comments on here.

                      However Rae - you knew what I am talking about - and the 173rd shouldnt be in Romania.

                      What you produced by putting it in a V1 only book is apocrypha - i.e. its on a par with Soviet tanks equipping Mexican units in City of Angels.

                      Basically you set up a complete disconnect between V1 and V2.2 - and yes there are a few examples of that - i.e. you can mention the 2nd Infantry starting in Vietnam in the V2.2. But the difference is that it is a start location only - it ended up exactly where it was in V1 by June 2000- right down to the same numbers of men and armor.

                      Pro-NATO Italian forces in Romania - ok I can make that argument too. But the 173rd - nope. There is only one reason to put them there and I wont be obvious and state why. Dont want to give anyone fodder for another ban.

                      So no - I dont plan to waste 9.99 on a book that basically sets up yet another endless argument on canon and differences in timeline and does so on purpose.

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                      • #26
                        David, are you sure you really want to escalate to actively attacking other creators products

                        - C.
                        Clayton A. Oliver • Occasional RPG Freelancer Since 1996

                        Author of The Pacific Northwest, coauthor of Tara Romaneasca, creator of several other free Twilight: 2000 and Twilight: 2013 resources, and curator of an intermittent gaming blog.

                        It rarely takes more than a page to recognize that you're in the presence of someone who can write, but it only takes a sentence to know you're dealing with someone who can't.
                        - Josh Olson

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                        • #27
                          Already a Copper Best Seller. Congrats Teg & Rae!

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                          • #28
                            Originally posted by Tegyrius View Post
                            David, are you sure you really want to escalate to actively attacking other creators products

                            - C.
                            Clayton

                            I pointed out that having the 173rd in Romania is ignoring multiple references that it was in Kenya in V1 - Frank Frey's notes that have been published here on his unpublished V1 module, Raellus's own post in the first fanzine, etc.

                            In V2.2 its canonically there in Kenya since late 1997 - which has been referred to here in multiple posts as well in the East Africa Sourcebook itself - but which since you have me on ignore you wouldn't know - which I referred to (i.e. how would you know if you are ignoring those posts - that isn't criticism that is just a statement of fact that you yourself have made repeatedly here on the forum about that status as to my posts and my published work).

                            Thus your release currently shows a unit there that shouldn't be there for either version of the timeline. I faced a similar situation when I did my initial release of the East Africa Sourcebook. It was pointed out to me by more than one person and I said "thank you very much". I looked and they were correct so when the sourcebook was updated to make it V2.2 specifically per the agreement with Marc to make it canon, I corrected that error and did it with no issue at all.

                            I did it freely and accepted it for what it was - constructive criticism - and acknowledged the error by making the correction.

                            Is this an active attack - no it isn't. Per the rules of the forum its constructive criticism and thus is legal per the rules of the forum - unless those rules have been changed.

                            Its not attacking the work at all. It is constructive criticism pointing out that having them there sets up a dysfunction between the two versions of the canon for the original version of the game. Constructive criticism is legal per the guidelines of this forum.

                            Personally I hope the book is a great success as was the Pacific Northwest which I consider an excellent book. I have repeatedly stated that here, on the discord, and on Facebook as well (both groups that I am a member of), recommending it highly as a great work for the game and one that I wish Marc would make officially canon.

                            Thus if constructive criticism now merits a warning and removal of a post then it seems that the forum is yet again changing its rules. I hope that isn't the case as the forum has been a source of joy and information to me for a long time.

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                            • #29
                              Olefin,

                              Youve referenced Frank Freys unpublished notes and an article in an unofficial fanzine to support your claim that the 173rd shouldn't be in Romania.

                              Can you supply a quote from any v1 material published by GDW that explicitly gives a location for the 173rd Airborne Brigade (Other than the Romania sourcebook obviously).
                              Author of the unofficial and strictly non canon Alternative Survivor’s Guide to the United Kingdom

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                              • #30
                                "Constructive"

                                Originally posted by Olefin View Post
                                Its not attacking the work at all. It is constructive criticism pointing out that having them there sets up a dysfunction between the two versions of the canon for the original version of the game. Constructive criticism is legal per the guidelines of this forum.

                                Thus if constructive criticism now merits a warning and removal of a post then it seems that the forum is yet again changing its rules. I hope that isn't the case as the forum has been a source of joy and information to me for a long time.
                                Your post has been undeleted so that everyone can see how constructive you were being.

                                -
                                Author of Twilight 2000 adventure modules, Rook's Gambit and The Poisoned Chalice, the campaign sourcebook, Korean Peninsula, the gear-book, Baltic Boats, and the co-author of Tara Romaneasca, a campaign sourcebook for Romania, all available for purchase on DriveThruRPG:

                                https://www.drivethrurpg.com/product...--Rooks-Gambit
                                https://www.drivethrurpg.com/product...ula-Sourcebook
                                https://www.drivethrurpg.com/product...nia-Sourcebook
                                https://www.drivethrurpg.com/product...liate_id=61048
                                https://preview.drivethrurpg.com/en/...-waters-module

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